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Love / Hate
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03-30-2018, 07:47 AM
I don't know, I like the repetition, but I feel that it might be done a little too much. I would make it a little shorter. Also, I feel that you should do a bit more with specific feelings and such, in that it kind of brings out a bit more of the dual, positive negative thing. So, I'd say just make it a little shorter and focus more on diction.
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Love / Hate - by TemporaryForever - 03-08-2018, 03:01 PM
RE: Love / Hate - by Purva Joshi - 03-08-2018, 03:40 PM
RE: Love / Hate - by cloud - 03-08-2018, 04:52 PM
RE: Love / Hate - by TemporaryForever - 03-09-2018, 02:20 PM
RE: Love / Hate - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-08-2018, 07:11 PM
RE: Love / Hate - by Todd - 03-09-2018, 07:49 AM
RE: Love / Hate - by Finnysta54 - 03-09-2018, 11:58 AM
RE: Love / Hate - by nibbed - 03-09-2018, 11:38 PM
RE: Love / Hate - by Pippa - 03-12-2018, 01:46 PM
RE: Love / Hate - by SpaceDirt - 03-30-2018, 07:47 AM
RE: Love / Hate - by wesliewilkin - 04-18-2018, 08:01 AM
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