03-28-2018, 10:03 PM
Hey Danny,
Thanks for the feedback. I've been letting this one sit for a bit because I want to really give it a good going over when I edit it, the second stanza especially. I like your interpretation of the last line by the way.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. I've been letting this one sit for a bit because I want to really give it a good going over when I edit it, the second stanza especially. I like your interpretation of the last line by the way.
Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.

