First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings
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Hey Danny,
Thanks for the feedback. I've been letting this one sit for a bit because I want to really give it a good going over when I edit it, the second stanza especially. I like your interpretation of the last line by the way.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-11-2018, 06:27 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by nibbed - 03-11-2018, 01:52 PM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-13-2018, 07:27 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Knot - 03-14-2018, 01:19 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-14-2018, 02:07 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-24-2018, 08:04 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by danny_ - 03-28-2018, 01:49 PM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-28-2018, 10:03 PM



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