Casing

[danny_]

Yeah, others beat me to it.

Now, I personally like a read that draws in more solid images. Talk about the room, the light on the floor. Is it moonlight? Is it street light? Talk about the unmade bed, the cold feeling of steel in the hand, the clank of metal sounds outside- the crashing of trashcans by some scavenging creature, the thoughts in passing- the reflection of the decision to do this thing, to stress that trigger muscle. The very last thought that crosses the mind before there is no mind. All of that kind of thing gives me something to see and feel, rather than abstract messages that I have to decode - because after decoding the only reward I get is that I actually understood the thing, but it was mostly just a mental challenge.

Just my thoughts on the matter :] It's something I'm personally still working on myself.

Hello all!

This is my first posting of my work here. 

Hope you all enjoy!

This is titled "Casing" its a reflection of my Alive day and my battle with Mental Illness in Free Verse. 

An erratic pulse accompanies like thoughts
Hand shakily leveling the escape 
Sitting in silent contemplation 
Sleepless nights take toll
Worn notepads of expression lay scattered 
Mirror reflecting raw emotion 
A singular muscle fiber threshold 
Synaptic misfire risks neurocellular expansion 
Desire to reach out met by paralytic fear 
A twitch , A depression of steel
One does see the cailber of my thoughts.