Mental Block

Mental Block

kaos

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#17

03-27-2018, 03:37 PM

I liked your poem, the idea was showcased well, but i especially liked the way your lines kept decreasing in length, drawing a parallel with the ever shortening time. Cool stuff. Also the line about grace given was nice.

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Mental Block - by flagthrower - 12-11-2017, 03:49 PM

RE: Mental Block - by Keith - 12-11-2017, 10:10 PM

RE: Mental Block - by vagabond - 12-11-2017, 10:12 PM

RE: Mental Block - by flagthrower - 12-12-2017, 07:39 AM

RE: Mental Block - by flowerburgers - 12-15-2017, 03:55 AM

RE: Mental Block - by nibbed - 12-15-2017, 06:23 AM

RE: Mental Block - by Lavieboheme - 12-15-2017, 08:55 AM

RE: Mental Block - by Joseph918 - 12-21-2017, 05:49 PM

RE: Mental Block - by chopblock - 12-24-2017, 12:55 PM

RE: Mental Block - by AndyBryant123 - 03-01-2018, 09:42 AM

RE: Mental Block - by Eat.think.live.peaceful - 03-01-2018, 11:00 AM

RE: Mental Block - by Trophic_Cascade - 03-04-2018, 04:53 PM

RE: Mental Block - by Silfan - 03-04-2018, 07:49 PM

RE: Mental Block - by Lorvick - 03-08-2018, 10:45 AM

RE: Mental Block - by zwubz - 03-19-2018, 01:29 PM

RE: Mental Block - by SpaceDirt - 03-25-2018, 09:57 AM

RE: Mental Block - by kaos - 03-27-2018, 03:37 PM

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