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zwubz
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03-27-2018, 01:15 PM

Your sense is spot on. Advice is more than welcome. Smile

I also think looking back on it that its heavy handed vocab and lack of clarity hinder it a bit. Fire away good sir!

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Casing - by zwubz - 03-23-2018, 01:11 PM

RE: Casing - by danny_ - 03-27-2018, 02:37 AM

RE: Casing - by zwubz - 03-27-2018, 01:15 PM

RE: Casing - by cloud - 03-27-2018, 06:32 PM

RE: Casing - by zwubz - 03-28-2018, 04:58 AM

RE: Casing - by vagabond - 03-27-2018, 11:46 PM

RE: Casing - by danny_ - 03-28-2018, 06:32 AM

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