Fearful Wading

[danny_]

The key to doing this would not be in rewording old work. It's to recall the original inspiration and come at it from a completely fresh start - and with all the experience gained over years. I know many poems are just hot air, emotion that really had no potential direction in the first place. But for many I can recall how much I wanted to paint the picture but just didn't know how.

Besides that I always like to hear from different people why a poem doesn't work well.