Fearful Wading

[danny_]

Hey thanks for that candid critique! That's actually what I was looking for. It's 15 years old, I was new to writing. But I was curious how it would be critiqued, and you did well. "So what?" good point. Thanks for the compliments on some imagery. I'm considering doing new poems based on some old work - taking the initial inspirations as a seed and sprouting poems entirely more engaging. This helps. Thanks