03-27-2018, 02:37 AM
Best line: Worn notepads of expression lay scattered
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The only sense I can make out of it is possible suicide. A bit wordy, lacks clarity. I have a little advice but only with permission. Thanks for sharing.
Not sure if you would like any critique?
If not, stop reading here. Hehe.
The only sense I can make out of it is possible suicide. A bit wordy, lacks clarity. I have a little advice but only with permission. Thanks for sharing.
"The best way out is always through."-Robert Frost
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