from IISZ, edit 2

[danny_]

Hi RiverNotch. I was curious what goes on in this forum and I see some good stuff going on, including this! Now granted I wasn't really pulled in until second stanza, but after that, it was rather captivating. I don't yet know what it's exactly about (I would need to spend more time with it, learn some of the names used.) But the images...! That's what I enjoyed. I do wish it was more accessible as far as meaning, the last stanza loses me rather than ties things together, but I still enjoyed the read.