First Edit: Red River of the North

First Edit: Red River of the North

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03-26-2018, 04:14 AM

Hey Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. I was unsure about the use of "lovelorn", so I thought I'd see what people thought of it. You got me thinking about the line order, which is a step in the right direction for an edit.

Thanks again,
Richard

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First Edit: Red River of the North - by Richard - 03-25-2018, 04:02 AM

RE: Red River of the North - by Knot - 03-26-2018, 12:51 AM

RE: Red River of the North - by Richard - 03-26-2018, 04:14 AM

RE: Red River of the North - by danny_ - 03-27-2018, 01:56 PM

RE: Red River of the North - by vagabond - 03-28-2018, 12:42 AM

RE: Red River of the North - by Richard - 03-28-2018, 10:00 PM

RE: First Edit: Red River of the North - by Richard - 05-08-2018, 11:46 AM

RE: First Edit: Red River of the North - by RiverNotch - 05-09-2018, 08:53 PM

RE: First Edit: Red River of the North - by Richard - 05-09-2018, 09:30 PM

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