First Edit: Red River of the North

[Knot]

Definitely something here, Richard
but it seems a bit unclear.

I like the 'Costco blanket' line
(though perhaps 'abandoned' for 'lovelorn')
but I don't think it does quite do enough...yet.

L4 is somewhat contrary to L5/6
(either 'occasionally' or 'forever')

How about;
Red River of the North

You'd probably brag to the oceans
if you could: compare your body counts,
You, who devour woman and girls
like chocolate covered raisins,
occasionally vomiting one back up.


Best, Knot.