A Poet On Drums

[Knot]

Enjoyable piece Tiger,
with a good end line.
Couple of suggestions:
Have the 'beat' lines increase
over the course of the piece.

you start with a beat;
boom, boom-boom

then learn the snare,

boom pow, boom-boom pow
boom pow, boom-boom pow

...

do you need 'the other two...'? (L11)
Period after 'intuitive' ?

Do you need the 'ands' (L23/25)?

(Just a thought but, don't you
start with a count? ...3, 4)

Best, Knot.