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Rain(TI part 1)
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03-21-2018, 07:43 AM
Hi Andy. I dont make a very good critic but ill do my best to give feedback. Your poem does indeed sound very pretty and serine however I do feel like the use of the word "me" might be being overused as it dosnt not fit within each line but shows up commonly. Try and fit in some unique words making it creative and more your own.
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Rain(TI part 1) - by AndyBryant123 - 03-01-2018, 11:41 AM
RE: Rain(TI part 1) - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-01-2018, 06:25 PM
RE: Rain(TI part 1) - by AndyBryant123 - 03-02-2018, 02:57 AM
RE: Rain(TI part 1) - by ritwiksadhu33 - 03-03-2018, 11:24 PM
RE: Rain(TI part 1) - by Winterloc - 03-08-2018, 11:52 AM
RE: Rain(TI part 1) - by Fatman Butter - 03-16-2018, 10:08 PM
RE: Rain(TI part 1) - by TemporaryForever - 03-19-2018, 06:19 AM
RE: Rain(TI part 1) - by Tudor140707 - 03-19-2018, 09:51 PM
RE: Rain(TI part 1) - by HersheyKiss - 03-21-2018, 07:43 AM
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