Helios' March
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Great ending!

And I like how you personified dawn breaking as a race.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Helios' March - by Tiger the Lion - 03-17-2018, 02:55 AM
RE: Helios' March - by Todd - 03-17-2018, 03:02 AM
RE: Helios' March - by cloud - 03-17-2018, 07:01 AM
RE: Helios' March - by Magpie - 03-21-2018, 06:32 PM



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