03-16-2018, 10:08 PM
Andy, I would have liked to see the 3 parts of this together (I rally wouldn't have been overwhelmed. And looking at other comments here I think a few of the other guys would have been okay with it all in one hit) My main concern for this piece is that it seems to repeating. That is the clouds come, (boo) then they go, (hooray) This seems to happen with minimal emotion; but without the rest of the piece it's impossible to gauge if this needs a tweak or a heavy edit.