03-16-2018, 09:29 PM
Please realise my opinion is worth only what you have paid for it and I am no authority on poetry just an occasional reader and a dabbling writer. Now you have where I'm coming from, I need to sway there are bits of this that draw me in; but mostly they are followed by a line or two of confusion.
Yet, only does the grave,
fools,
from the foolish save!
That above...it reads so well, but I don't know what you're trying yo say. Over all this poem is a thumbs up, but I think there is improvement to be found.
Yet, only does the grave,
fools,
from the foolish save!
That above...it reads so well, but I don't know what you're trying yo say. Over all this poem is a thumbs up, but I think there is improvement to be found.