If trees could talk
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Please don't take offence as this is just my opinion and worth only what you have paid for it. I don't actually think this is in any way a poem, rather it is the first thought of something that might be worth exploring to find if there is a poem within. Rather than declaring the tree's perspective as worthless, why not explore what it might have viewed/experienced: a kid climbing into its branches, lovers laying in its shade, lots of stuff. Just stopped short there cos writing this has given me an idea for a poem/story...so maybe I'm not giving bad advice--which is pretty astonishing as I freely admit I don't really know what I'm talking about.
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If trees could talk - by lauraelizdok - 02-20-2018, 06:26 AM
RE: If trees could talk - by tectak - 02-20-2018, 08:43 AM
RE: If trees could talk - by ellajam - 02-20-2018, 11:05 PM
RE: If trees could talk - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2018, 01:22 AM
RE: If trees could talk - by nibbed - 02-21-2018, 04:03 PM
RE: If trees could talk - by AndyBryant123 - 03-02-2018, 03:04 AM
RE: If trees could talk - by Fatman Butter - 03-16-2018, 06:03 PM
RE: If trees could talk - by Thunderembargo - 03-22-2018, 06:41 AM
RE: If trees could talk - by FITAHW_ - 03-27-2018, 04:10 PM



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