First Edit: No Such Things as Happy Endings
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Hey Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. It's funny because "I was actually greeting death" was my original first line, but I changed it as I played around with this on my own. I'm planning on returning to that as the starting point because it was that line that sparked this poem in my brain.

Thanks again,
Richard
Time is the best editor.
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RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-11-2018, 06:27 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by nibbed - 03-11-2018, 01:52 PM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-13-2018, 07:27 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Knot - 03-14-2018, 01:19 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-14-2018, 02:07 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-24-2018, 08:04 AM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by danny_ - 03-28-2018, 01:49 PM
RE: No Such Things as Happy Endings - by Richard - 03-28-2018, 10:03 PM



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