Second Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore

Second Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore

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03-13-2018, 07:24 AM

Hey Todd and Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. Todd, I was wondering if that first line was effective as an opening, so I appreciate what you had to say there. Knot, I quite like your idea to end on "waiting".

Thanks again,
Richard

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Second Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Richard - 03-01-2018, 03:37 AM

RE: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-01-2018, 04:03 AM

RE: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Richard - 03-01-2018, 04:22 AM

RE: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Todd - 03-01-2018, 06:16 AM

RE: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Richard - 03-01-2018, 09:23 AM

RE: First Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Richard - 03-05-2018, 11:43 AM

RE: First Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Knot - 03-07-2018, 02:56 AM

RE: First Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Richard - 03-07-2018, 02:53 PM

RE: First Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by tectak - 03-08-2018, 12:12 AM

RE: First Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Richard - 03-08-2018, 11:40 AM

RE: First Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by tectak - 03-10-2018, 01:27 AM

RE: Second Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Richard - 03-12-2018, 04:18 AM

RE: Second Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Todd - 03-13-2018, 01:35 AM

RE: Second Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Knot - 03-13-2018, 01:58 AM

RE: Second Edit: Why I Don't Sleep Naked Anymore - by Richard - 03-13-2018, 07:24 AM

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