Love / Hate

[nibbed]

I tried a little something different with this one. I'm still not entirely sure what I think of the results.

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You comfort me, I love you.

You hurt me, I hate you.

You want to be with me, I love you.

You're never here, I hate you.

You lift me up, I love you.

You tear me down, I hate you.

You treat me well, I love you.

You ignore my pleas, I hate you.

You smile at me, I love you.

You're angry with me, I hate you.

You honor me, I love you.

You mistreat me, I hate you.

You tell the truth, I love you.

You feed me lies, I hate you.

You stand up for me, I love you.

You let me suffer, I hate you.

You care for me, I love you.

You ignore my soul, I hate you.

You say the right things, I love you.

You never do them, I hate you.

You make me live, I love you.

You let me die, I hate you.

Hello TemporaryForever

I appreciate the boldness of your post.  Something seems to be missing.
If you are going to ignore visuals, I would eliminate the repetition of love
and hate in the piece, this would give the title more power and eliminate
the monotone, encouraging the reader.

-nibbed