Love / Hate

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Humans are two faced and whimsical in nature, man's inconsistency is a nuisance indeed. I would agree.
The way you set up the poem definitely reflects the motif of duality, and the structure you lay out reinforces that in a creative way. cool.

I guess the drawback of the structure is the fact that it is so narrow and long; you beat it to death, essentially, and exhausted its parameters
so much so it distracts me by how much you emphasized the structure, I hope that makes sense

To make things more interesting, you can try reversing the expected response:

You comfort me, I hate you.

You hurt me, I love you.

You want to be with me, I hate you

You're never here, I love you.

You lift me up, I hate you.

You tear me down, I hate you.

You treat me well, I love you.

Not only is this more interesting, it lets us know you're directly captured and shaped by a relationship, for better or for worse
(you might have not been aiming for that intent, just food for thought)

You might also want to extract the most compelling aspects of your ideas and distill them into a shorter length
that will add more impact overall, and specify your theme