03-05-2018, 02:30 PM
"Should Know"
Everyone is telling me that I should be all good to go.
Everyone is telling me that I should just say I don't know. [to just say, "I don't know"]?
I should know because my head is screwed on[enjambment] tight as [a] jelly jars,
plus my home is filled with many things that come from near and [&] far. both filled and many is redundant.
I just know that I a'm seventeen and life could end right now.
Living like there's no tomorrow, futureless[,] and feeling proud.
Slowly I see my life fade to black, because I failed to try.
Quickly I would trade it back, to try and fix my [this]messed up life.
What messed up the life? Was there an outside force?
Just curious. There was some trouble with the cliche,
but I don't mind.
-nibbed
Everyone is telling me that I should be all good to go.
Everyone is telling me that I should just say I don't know. [to just say, "I don't know"]?
I should know because my head is screwed on[enjambment] tight as [a] jelly jars,
plus my home is filled with many things that come from near and [&] far. both filled and many is redundant.
I just know that I a'm seventeen and life could end right now.
Living like there's no tomorrow, futureless[,] and feeling proud.
Slowly I see my life fade to black, because I failed to try.
Quickly I would trade it back, to try and fix my [this]messed up life.
What messed up the life? Was there an outside force?
Just curious. There was some trouble with the cliche,
but I don't mind.
-nibbed
there's always a better reason to love

