Terror
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(02-20-2018, 07:46 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Terror

You're just afraid is all,

that between the lines
of flapping white linens 
hung to dry
a noon sun asserts a light
immune to reproach.

I see you squinting. 

What you gonna do
now that black is bulletproof           I really like this stanza, the rhyme scheme gives it a really cool feel.
and ricochets sound
all around you?

Get the bourbon
from the gun closet
and pour it on the wounds?
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Terror - by Tiger the Lion - 02-20-2018, 07:46 AM
RE: Terror - by QDeathstar - 02-20-2018, 01:21 PM
RE: Terror - by RiverNotch - 02-21-2018, 01:43 AM
RE: Terror - by vagabond - 02-21-2018, 10:18 AM
RE: Terror - by nibbed - 02-21-2018, 02:04 PM
RE: Terror - by Tiger the Lion - 02-22-2018, 06:22 AM
RE: Terror - by AndyBryant123 - 03-04-2018, 01:28 AM
RE: Terror - by ritwiksadhu33 - 03-04-2018, 02:42 AM



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