Oratorio

Oratorio

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03-03-2018, 02:24 AM

Hey guys, thanks to Tectak and Todd for the feedback which I think has helped with the re-write. Trying to be a little tighter in terms of lineation and I hope this revision marks the turning of the tide, I'm sure you'll let me know.

Once again ta for the feedback

Johnny

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Oratorio - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-01-2018, 07:44 PM

RE: Oratorio - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-03-2018, 01:20 AM

RE: Oratorio - by Todd - 03-03-2018, 01:32 AM

RE: Oratorio - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-03-2018, 02:24 AM

RE: Oratorio - by tectak - 03-03-2018, 06:45 AM

RE: Oratorio - by Todd - 03-03-2018, 06:51 AM

RE: Oratorio - by 20_Hamilton_18 - 03-03-2018, 09:11 PM

RE: Oratorio - by tectak - 03-03-2018, 09:22 PM

RE: Oratorio - by Knot - 03-04-2018, 02:16 AM

RE: Oratorio - by RC James - 03-05-2018, 05:24 PM

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