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And Prayers

Knot

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03-02-2018, 12:18 AM

Nicely understated piece Tiger.

Small suggestion, make L2/L8
symmetrical, either both 'of you'
or 'you were'.

I guess you tried right aligning
'here'(with the 'e' in home)?

Best, Knot.

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And Prayers - by Tiger the Lion - 02-28-2018, 08:55 AM

RE: And Prayers - by ellajam - 02-28-2018, 10:17 AM

RE: And Prayers - by Quixilated - 02-28-2018, 09:40 PM

RE: And Prayers - by Tiger the Lion - 03-01-2018, 10:11 AM

RE: And Prayers - by Knot - 03-02-2018, 12:18 AM

RE: And Prayers - by RiverNotch - 03-02-2018, 01:43 AM

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