Moose and Squirrel (Revision)

Moose and Squirrel (Revision)

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03-01-2018, 06:21 AM

Richard, a lot of good word substitutions (that I fully agree with). Editing becomes smaller more important steps as you get a poem closer to where it needs to be.

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Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Todd - 02-28-2018, 02:01 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel - by Knot - 02-28-2018, 02:42 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel - by Keith - 02-28-2018, 03:29 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel - by Todd - 02-28-2018, 03:37 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel - by vagabond - 02-28-2018, 04:24 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel - by Todd - 02-28-2018, 04:33 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel - by Todd - 02-28-2018, 04:39 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Knot - 02-28-2018, 05:00 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Todd - 03-01-2018, 01:32 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by vagabond - 02-28-2018, 07:14 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Todd - 03-01-2018, 01:34 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Knot - 03-01-2018, 01:53 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Todd - 03-01-2018, 02:12 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Richard - 03-01-2018, 04:19 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Todd - 03-01-2018, 06:21 AM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by RC James - 03-05-2018, 05:29 PM

RE: Moose and Squirrel (Revision) - by Todd - 03-14-2018, 04:30 AM

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