Moose and Squirrel (Revision)

[Todd]

You learn this at school through the torture--I'll think about it but it doesn't make sense for me without the article.
As in, torture is how one is taught.
You learn this at school through torture
by the clocks unmoving hands...
(just a thought)


This is the second burden of childhood.
('Which is'?)--I think the which is is explained in the hat trick itself. I'm inclined to leave this open.

  - I meant 'which is' as an alternative to 'that is'.

I hope you don't mind the dialogue. I truly appreciate the focus you gave to certain elements. I think it should improve the end product (key word: eventually).

Eventually is always the keyword.

Best, Knot

I get what you mean. That might be better. I'll think on it.

Thanks,

Todd