the cottage

[alonso ramoran]

the cottage 

dream of youth,


peeling sundown  




firmament, frees  








temperate wind 
















into an afternoon
































of child echoes  
































































chasing seagulls 

edit 2: found the cottage

dream peels sundown 
firmament, releasing 
temperate wind into the
child echoes' afternoon  
of chasing seagulls


edit 1: found the cottage 
 
peeled of sundown  
firmament, the dream  
releases gentle air into  
an afternoon of children 
chasing seagulls 


original: found the cottage 
 
evening firmament is peeled  
from the dream, releasing 
a balmy breeze of afternoon  
that children frolic in, 
chasing seagulls