02-28-2018, 01:07 AM
Tectak,
Perhaps it is just a story with line breaks and stops, perhaps its not. That is up to each of us to decide. Definitely sat down to write this as a poem, does that make it one? I like to think I could copy out a receipt from my weekly groceries and call that a poem, maybe I will. I'm glad you enjoyed it at any rate and I'm very much obliged for the feedback, it definitely gives me something to think about in relation to this piece and we shall see how that impacts on any sort of revisions I may make to this in the future.
Good luck with the hangover
Johnny
Perhaps it is just a story with line breaks and stops, perhaps its not. That is up to each of us to decide. Definitely sat down to write this as a poem, does that make it one? I like to think I could copy out a receipt from my weekly groceries and call that a poem, maybe I will. I'm glad you enjoyed it at any rate and I'm very much obliged for the feedback, it definitely gives me something to think about in relation to this piece and we shall see how that impacts on any sort of revisions I may make to this in the future.
Good luck with the hangover
Johnny