02-26-2018, 07:57 PM
Hey Paul, thanks for the response, I've made a few changes re your feedback nothing major, but I've looked at the structure at certain points and I think having read it to myself it's really helped with the flow.
In terms of firing through edits and revisions at the minute, I'm blessed or cursed with being unemployed at the minute so I have very little else to do all day, after by endless job search but sit and revise some of my poetry if I've not been lucky enough to write anything new that day.
Anywayz thanks again
Johnny
In terms of firing through edits and revisions at the minute, I'm blessed or cursed with being unemployed at the minute so I have very little else to do all day, after by endless job search but sit and revise some of my poetry if I've not been lucky enough to write anything new that day.
Anywayz thanks again
Johnny