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Given that I am not usually a fan of rhyming poetry I find myself greatly surprised that I did in actual fact enjoy this read. Often when you read rhyming verse it feels forced and far too contrived and yet in this instance it works and perhaps I would wager this comes down to the tongue and cheek nature of the work itself. You have taken a feeling that we all have felt as writers and rather than melodramatically take it into the realms of despair you have instead created a sense of fun around it. That being said; for me I would suggest that it is not as concise as it perhaps could be and I think a little pruning here or there would definitely help in giving this a little more bite.
Kind Regards
Johnny