This is a good poem (previously Reject Note)

[nibbed]

Reject Note

This is a good poem.

It speaks sparingly,
and only on matters of great import,
with well chosen words.
It doesn't carry over, or under.                                                   -I like how the first 5 lines sets the tone.
You relate to it on a subconscious level.
Your subconscious relates to it on a subconscious level.               -this made me smile, because it happens so much
It comes from a good family.                                                        -here begins a wild personification                                                    
An obedient son, caring parent,
loving husband. Or at least dutiful.
Somewhat conservative on social issues.
Has an affable old guy sort of personality.
The instant you see it you start getting good vibes.
It says “thank you” when you offer it tea,
and accepts the proffered cup gingerly,
sippping without a sound - most British.                                        -sp.
It inclines its head as it passes you on the street,                           -wow!
acknowledging your existence, but not
enjambing over your awkwardness.
It realizes you don't want details.
It pats your dog on the head, calls him “a good boy”.
For an instant you think it is talking about you.

Is it publication material?
Maybe but not sure.
It hopes to talk to me sometime later.
Encourage the author to submit again.




I've only submitted once and the result was disappointing,
so I kinda understand how this would offer a clever hint of sarcasm.
I think sarcasm can be difficult in poetry.
The form is excellent. I enjoyed it very much.
If this is a recent event that has happened to this writer, I am sorry.
Your poem is very easy-to-read and fun. Yes, a good poem.


-nibbed