02-18-2018, 10:58 PM
(02-18-2018, 01:22 PM)unregistered Wrote: I feel like I understand the poem but I am still missing something. I get how it is describing black ice and how it can be very dangerous to drivers (re-frozen fatally), but other than that I don't get anything from it so it falls a little bit flat to me. Other than that it flows really well for me when spoken aloud and my only advice would be to include an accident, although that would lengthen it a little bit.
I would love to hear your meaning behind if you wouldn't mind sharing.
Non-practicing atheist