Black Ice
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Black Ice


Snow melts on bridges,
white-pack warmed to water
in a kindly sun.

But bitter fractions lie,
re-frozen fatally
by night and shadow.


Any level critique appreciated.
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Black Ice - by dukealien - 02-18-2018, 07:55 AM
RE: Black Ice - by unregistered - 02-18-2018, 01:22 PM
RE: Black Ice - by dukealien - 02-18-2018, 10:58 PM
RE: Black Ice - by Bloodline - 02-18-2018, 10:01 PM
RE: Black Ice - by unregistered - 02-19-2018, 10:57 AM
RE: Black Ice - by dukealien - 02-20-2018, 01:15 AM
RE: Black Ice - by vagabond - 02-21-2018, 09:48 AM
RE: Black Ice - by dukealien - 02-22-2018, 11:13 PM



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