Afterlife.
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(02-13-2018, 07:51 PM)billy Wrote:  twat Big Grin
Aw, thanks Billy. I know how you feel about twat  Big Grin

(02-13-2018, 08:57 PM)ellajam Wrote:  So expressive. Big Grin

For me, full of hope and inspiration. Couldn't imagine it said any better. Big Grin
No one could.  Cool

(02-13-2018, 10:01 PM)Todd Wrote:  The period in the title is the best element.
Thanks for noticing, Todd. 

@River. The emoji is not part of the poem. It was necessary for the post to accept the white space.  I felt it was less likely to be intrusive than any keyboard character. 

@Vag. Stop smiting yourself. We have gods for that.

** I wasn't really expecting line by line crits on this one, but all reads and comments are appreciated. On a high note, I think I may have finally perfected word economy.  Thumbsup

Paul
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Messages In This Thread
Afterlife. - by Tiger the Lion - 02-13-2018, 03:13 PM
RE: Afterlife. - by billy - 02-13-2018, 07:51 PM
RE: Afterlife. - by ellajam - 02-13-2018, 08:57 PM
RE: Afterlife. - by Todd - 02-13-2018, 10:01 PM
RE: Afterlife. - by RiverNotch - 02-13-2018, 11:00 PM
RE: Afterlife. - by vagabond - 02-14-2018, 12:55 AM
RE: Afterlife. - by Tiger the Lion - 02-14-2018, 05:13 PM
RE: Afterlife. - by Quixilated - 02-15-2018, 11:34 AM



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