Together, apart

[TemporaryForever]

I like a lot of what I see here. I think the first part could be tightened up a bit and maybe reworded. You use some great words, but if your goal is to have your poetry be accessible you want to choose words that a general audience will easily understand. You might think most people know what "reverberate" means but that's not necessarily the case.

Also, good descriptions! I got some great mental images from this one.