02-07-2018, 10:27 PM
Hey Janine,
Thanks for the kind words.
I quite like this piece. I especially like the ending. It made me stop, think and then reread the poem. Good stuff.
Cheers,
Richard
Thanks for the kind words.
(02-07-2018, 04:22 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: In the NightmareHey Tiger,
In the nightmare
my father is alive again
paranoid and venomous
with dementia
demanding I confess
what I have done with his son.
I quite like this piece. I especially like the ending. It made me stop, think and then reread the poem. Good stuff.
Cheers,
Richard
Time is the best editor.