Second Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide

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Second Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide

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02-06-2018, 11:42 AM

Hey Knot,
Thanks for the feedback. I'm thinking I need to add more about the son, so that might be the verse you mentioned that was missing... I might let this sit for a bit before attempting another edit. I need to be in the right mindset for exploring something this dark.

Thanks again,
Richard

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Second Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 01-20-2018, 01:19 PM

RE: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Todd - 01-20-2018, 02:01 PM

RE: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 01-20-2018, 10:41 PM

RE: Double-Murder and Suicide - by nibbed - 01-24-2018, 03:17 AM

RE: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 01-24-2018, 08:21 AM

RE: Double-Murder and Suicide - by tectak - 01-26-2018, 09:25 PM

RE: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 01-27-2018, 01:04 PM

RE: Double-Murder and Suicide - by tectak - 01-27-2018, 05:42 PM

RE: First Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 01-31-2018, 12:58 PM

RE: First Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by tectak - 02-03-2018, 01:55 AM

RE: First Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 02-05-2018, 05:59 AM

RE: First Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Knot - 02-06-2018, 02:56 AM

RE: First Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 02-06-2018, 11:42 AM

RE: First Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by vagabond - 02-06-2018, 12:13 PM

RE: First Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Todd - 02-07-2018, 06:01 AM

RE: First Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 02-07-2018, 12:06 PM

RE: Second Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide - by Richard - 02-09-2018, 01:22 PM

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