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Musing on Moles

Musing on Moles
just mercedes
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02-01-2018, 04:08 PM
Haha! When I read this aloud, the sound of 'moles' becomes 'molls' - that's what we call the tired old whores who still paint up and go out on the weekends. There's a whole other fecund layer to your poem.

Thanks for posting.
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Messages In This Thread
Musing on Moles - by tectak - 01-31-2018, 09:56 PM
RE: Musing on Moles - by ellajam - 01-31-2018, 10:28 PM
RE: Musing on Moles - by vagabond - 01-31-2018, 10:54 PM
RE: Musing on Moles - by tectak - 02-01-2018, 12:10 AM
RE: Musing on Moles - by vagabond - 02-01-2018, 12:28 AM
RE: Musing on Moles - by tectak - 02-01-2018, 12:46 AM
RE: Musing on Moles - by nibbed - 02-01-2018, 12:24 PM
RE: Musing on Moles - by tectak - 02-01-2018, 09:57 PM
RE: Musing on Moles - by just mercedes - 02-01-2018, 04:08 PM
RE: Musing on Moles - by tectak - 02-02-2018, 01:00 AM



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