02-01-2018, 04:24 AM
Once again, one of the best poems I've read on the site.
(01-06-2018, 07:52 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: The Casual Observer
Angel
angel
angel
angel Is the loss of capitalization intended for effect? If so, I salute you, sir. Either way, I'm going to borrow this idea shamelessly someday.
look at you suffering
look at the peculiar baskets
you plop your eggs in Hopes and aspirations in doomed prospects?
look at yourself
falling
like the rest of them
into the killer whale tank
and me behind the glass
look at the fluoride-white teeth
biting you in the ass
and me behind the glass
and me behind the glass
and me behind the glass And doing nothing. Maybe having some popcorn. This really brings out all the nuances of being a "casual" obsever.

