To the Casual Observer
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Once again, one of the best poems I've read on the site.
(01-06-2018, 07:52 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  The Casual Observer

Angel 
angel 
angel 
angel Is the loss of capitalization intended for effect? If so, I salute you, sir. Either way, I'm going to borrow this idea shamelessly someday.
look at you suffering

look at the peculiar baskets
you plop your eggs in Hopes and aspirations in doomed prospects?

look at yourself

falling 
like the rest of them
into the killer whale tank
and me behind the glass

look at the fluoride-white teeth
biting you in the ass 

and me behind the glass
and me behind the glass
and me behind the glass And doing nothing. Maybe having some popcorn. This really brings out all the nuances of being a "casual" obsever.
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To the Casual Observer - by Tiger the Lion - 01-06-2018, 07:52 AM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by bloated_corpse - 01-06-2018, 08:36 AM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by ellajam - 01-06-2018, 09:25 AM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by vagabond - 01-06-2018, 09:29 PM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by nibbed - 01-08-2018, 04:17 PM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by Tiger the Lion - 01-09-2018, 05:37 AM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by vagabond - 01-09-2018, 06:10 AM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by Todd - 01-09-2018, 06:52 AM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by solitarysoul - 01-13-2018, 08:09 PM
RE: To the Casual Observer - by ritwiksadhu33 - 02-01-2018, 04:24 AM



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