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#19

01-30-2018, 06:35 AM

I like the abruptness of your lines. However, while it is clear that you are trying to create a "battle" between the different perspectives, the turn is sharp. It might be to better effect if you were to slowly transition into the grim side, rather than suddenly "losing hope".

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Push - by Persadia - 11-14-2017, 10:39 AM

RE: Push - by Lizzie - 11-14-2017, 10:57 AM

RE: Push - by vagabond - 11-15-2017, 01:13 AM

RE: Push - by alonso ramoran - 11-15-2017, 05:34 AM

RE: Push - by homer1950 - 11-15-2017, 05:42 AM

RE: Push - by bloated_corpse - 11-15-2017, 05:58 AM

RE: Push - by Persadia - 11-16-2017, 01:17 AM

RE: Push - by vagabond - 11-16-2017, 06:32 AM

RE: Push - by Lizzie - 11-16-2017, 02:25 AM

RE: Push - by nibbed - 11-16-2017, 03:33 AM

RE: Push - by tony3 - 11-17-2017, 07:12 AM

RE: Push - by Achebe - 11-17-2017, 09:12 AM

RE: Push - by GVBOY1966 - 11-28-2017, 03:59 PM

RE: Push - by Bloodline - 11-30-2017, 08:03 PM

RE: Push - by Mopkins - 12-04-2017, 09:35 PM

RE: Push - by Psychonyxx - 12-05-2017, 06:53 AM

RE: Push - by Rorf Asalis - 12-16-2017, 03:22 AM

RE: Push - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-27-2018, 04:18 AM

RE: Push - by therabbitisme - 01-30-2018, 06:35 AM

RE: Push - by gconrad - 02-13-2018, 12:14 AM

RE: Push - by moot - 02-25-2018, 10:39 PM

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