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05-06-2010, 05:34 PM

(04-16-2010, 12:05 PM)srijantje Wrote: Time goes by
Walking away......
Into the distance

I like it. I wouldn't even call it poignant... like the emotion has given way to calm. Very deft.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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