These distant mountains speak

These distant mountains speak

Bocasi
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#14

01-29-2018, 11:38 AM

So I joined a half hour ago...
I am horrible at critique, because I am all about reading others and actually being fed inspiration to write something myself.
The rattlesnake addition threw me off. It literally bites the flow off. Yet, perhaps that's the type of ending you sought? Abrupt.
Anyhow, write and post and take the critiques from others as motivation. Because that's what it is.

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These distant mountains speak - by Hannah - 01-02-2018, 05:05 AM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by vagabond - 01-02-2018, 05:53 AM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by Hannah - 01-02-2018, 08:04 AM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by Todd - 01-02-2018, 11:57 PM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by ArtyFl - 01-04-2018, 07:06 AM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by Kaily Bear - 01-09-2018, 01:50 PM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by nibbed - 01-09-2018, 03:35 PM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by solitarysoul - 01-13-2018, 09:28 PM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by Estefanie.V - 01-16-2018, 06:20 AM

RE: These distant mountains speak - by tryingtobeme - 01-16-2018, 01:00 PM