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01-29-2018, 08:04 AM

(01-29-2018, 07:50 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:
(01-29-2018, 07:42 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Stiff Drink

Outbursting outrageous red blisters
the ceiling. White knuckled hand
clutching hot steel
without
feeling.
nice enjambment on blisters, Mark
-successfully graphic image in few words
-might yet be able to cut "outbursting", maybe even "knuckled"

Agreed on the enjambment, Mark. I also love the title giving context to the poem.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Todd - 04-30-2017, 02:01 PM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 04-30-2017, 02:15 PM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Thunderembargo - 04-13-2018, 07:42 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by rayheinrich - 04-30-2017, 08:31 PM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by billy - 05-01-2017, 02:48 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-01-2017, 01:35 PM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by billy - 05-01-2017, 05:51 PM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-02-2017, 05:13 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by billy - 05-02-2017, 06:57 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by rayheinrich - 05-02-2017, 07:23 AM

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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Lizzie - 05-02-2017, 06:50 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Keith - 05-02-2017, 10:37 PM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Todd - 05-03-2017, 02:53 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Keith - 05-03-2017, 04:41 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-03-2017, 05:31 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Todd - 05-03-2017, 05:56 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-03-2017, 05:59 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by dukealien - 05-03-2017, 10:20 PM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Keith - 05-04-2017, 02:48 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Leanne - 05-06-2017, 07:57 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Keith - 05-08-2017, 08:05 AM

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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-06-2017, 09:01 AM

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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Tiger the Lion - 05-09-2017, 02:34 PM

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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 05-18-2017, 11:38 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by dukealien - 05-28-2017, 06:58 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Lizzie - 05-28-2017, 02:19 PM

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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Tiger the Lion - 06-01-2017, 04:52 AM

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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Tiger the Lion - 12-29-2017, 11:54 PM

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RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Keith - 01-27-2018, 05:18 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-27-2018, 05:39 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 01-28-2018, 07:43 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Mark A Becker - 01-29-2018, 07:42 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Tiger the Lion - 01-29-2018, 07:50 AM

RE: 4th Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Todd - 01-29-2018, 08:04 AM

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