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01-28-2018, 03:57 PM

(11-30-2017, 09:55 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: And dreams can be so mean
in their terminal tactility,

slinking away—

our fingers trailing their backs.

Onee of the most effective sentences I've read in poetry.

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Awake! - by Tiger the Lion - 11-30-2017, 09:55 AM

RE: Awake! - by shemthepenman - 11-30-2017, 10:45 AM

RE: Awake! - by Tiger the Lion - 12-03-2017, 11:46 AM

RE: Awake! - by Richard - 11-30-2017, 12:50 PM

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RE: Awake! - by ritwiksadhu33 - 01-28-2018, 03:57 PM

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