Second Edit: Double-Murder and Suicide

[Richard]

Hey tectak,
Thanks for the feedback. I found what you said about the issues with the perspective/point of view and the storytelling quite valuable. When I do an edit, these are areas I will definitely address. I don't want to give too much away here, but check out the spoiler if you want to know what this is based on.

Thanks again,
Richard

This is based on the Chris Benoit double murder suicide. If you don't know what that is, you can give it a google if you want. It was a big deal in Canada and the US back in 2007, but I'm not sure how it was viewed in other countries. Hope this helps a bit.