Grass

[yimbus]

I like this poem, and the first half is great. however, I do think the ending is a bit awkward. It leaves something to be desired for me, which can be a good thing but in this case I feel the poem leads up the question "for what?", but then ends too quickly in my opinion. It just feels somewhat incomplete to me, but if you are going for some ambiguity then it accomplished that well. I don't think the last two lines give me a satisfactory enough response to the question.