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Constellations
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01-26-2018, 12:31 PM
Overall I like it, however parts seem cliche. I think the imagery you use is very well done, and you used some metaphors very nicely. There are some deeper meanings included as well. Content wise it is excellent, it just could use some trimming here and there with wording and vocab in my opinion. “Dark and deep” is okay, but I think your ideas could be further expressed with more advanced and thought-provoking word choice
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Constellations - by Dcandy925 - 09-12-2017, 01:49 PM
RE: Constellations - by Achebe - 09-12-2017, 02:43 PM
RE: Constellations - by billy - 09-12-2017, 04:09 PM
RE: Constellations - by ClaireLou - 09-15-2017, 07:34 PM
RE: Constellations - by JMannUK - 09-16-2017, 05:15 AM
RE: Constellations - by Mopkins - 12-08-2017, 10:03 PM
RE: Constellations - by illuminations - 12-10-2017, 03:15 AM
RE: Constellations - by sarahfrance - 12-13-2017, 04:24 AM
RE: Constellations - by __rat__ - 12-13-2017, 06:02 PM
RE: Constellations - by PoetryWheel - 12-14-2017, 03:52 AM
RE: Constellations - by Lavieboheme - 12-15-2017, 08:59 AM
RE: Constellations - by elektric_timewarp - 01-02-2018, 10:39 PM
RE: Constellations - by moot - 01-22-2018, 05:17 PM
RE: Constellations - by moot - 01-23-2018, 04:45 PM
RE: Constellations - by yimbus - 01-26-2018, 12:31 PM
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