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[Tiger the Lion]

Hi Tiger - I like this yet something about the 'let' feels too passive for the image. For me. I do like the hard 'c's that sound like a break. I've been playing with ...in every crevice / that cracked between us ... or something like that

Appreciate the input Merc. My answer to "let" would be very similar to my answer for "in" except... I think "let" can be a rather powerful verb if used prudently. Passive yes, weak? Not necessarily.

**quick edit- "allow" might be slightly stronger but it messes with the syllable count, which is why I generally don't write 5-7-5.