01-17-2018, 03:23 AM
I really liked this poem. Even though you never used the word "death", I understand this is about what happens after we are gone. And in a nutshell, I think you summarized the human processing of the whole concept of the "after-death" very neatly, which is one of the most complex traits of human essence. In my opinion the question "For what?" explains the uncertainty that we do not know what comes after, and I really liked that question in your poem.

